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Date:         Tue, 26 Dec 2006 15:16:01 -0800
Reply-To:     Tom Salicos <Tom@SALICOS.COM>
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From:         Tom Salicos <Tom@SALICOS.COM>
Subject:      Re: Writers aren't artists
Comments: To: Nathaniel Poole <npoole@TELUS.NET>
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Writing assignment: >> Write a two page story that must contain a monkey, a hammer, a naked >> fakir in a seedy Winnipeg hotel room, and a talking, philosophical >> cat food can. >>

Ravi had always prided himself on his personal cleanliness. But trying to stand in the tiny improvised wash tub, he fell backwards onto the stained and tattered mattress that had served as his bed since the day he exchanged most of his remaining life savings for three months' rent in the tiny apartment that was soon to become his final residence.

As he lay on his back he could hear the always too-loud radio station playing in the next room. By those familiar old songs from nostalgia radio station CHNR he could place himself in much better times. Up until Boxing Day of 1982 he had held the position of faithful manservant to a succession of foreign dignitaries. Always Johnny-on-the-Spot, always anticipating and fulfilling needs and whims, he was most pleased when he could please.

But employing elderly help does not speak well of the powerful and Ravi was dismissed with no more than a traditional gift box that fed and amused him for a day or two. He chuckled to himself, "Well heck, I could have stretched that treasure to last for two weeks in these times. You just never can know."

After joining the ranks of the aging unwanted he had met up with some fellow expatriates and started entertaining crowds at summer fairs and flea markets. His name was Samuel, by the way. But to the locals, Ravi or Vishnu or Gunga Din were much less challenging labels. For some reason Ravi just stuck.

He turned his head to the picture on the night stand that so many of us would have mistaken for a milk crate. He smiled at the creased and cracked photo of Tippi, his long time companion and fellow entertainer. From the other side of the thin wall Peter Paul and Mary speculated about what they would do for the World, given the proper implement of change. Temporarily abandoning his personal convictions Ravi contemplated what he would have changed if he could turn back the clock. "Nothing. Alas, nothing. Not for not knowing the wrong, but for not knowing the alternative".

Ravi's body began to fail rapidly. Breathing yielded precious little reward despite his ever-increasing effort. The music from the next room began to matter so much less as the articles in his own room were beginning to pulsate in and out of focus. In semi-consciousness he witnessed Tuffy the Tabby detach himself from the printed label of yesterday's supper and approach - kindly, smiling, face-to-face to whisper, "Goodnight, Samuel".

Happy Boxing Day

Tom Salicos


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